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    I made the chages you showed me but there seems to be somthing wrong.

    The error I get is this:


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    User Agent: Mozilla/4.0 (compatible; MSIE 8.0; Windows NT 5.1; Trident/4.0; .NET CLR 1.1.4322)
    Timestamp: Thu, 5 Mar 2009 03:25:11 UTC


    Message: 'href' is null or not an object
    Line: 31
    Char: 7
    Code: 0
    URI: http://www.marie-joe.110mb.com/footer.js

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    I don't think that it's an issue that you have a similar (if not the same) aesthetic for your personal site. If that's your aesthetic, so be it.

    With that said, I do find the aesthetic to be amateur, pedestrian and somewhat trite. This doesn't do anything to showcase the offerings of Marie-Joe Restaurant. If you're charging this woman for this website, you're doing her a grave disservice.

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    No am not charging her. I am doing it for free. The reason for that is because I live in a small community. One way for me to get my foot in the door for computer services is to have a link on a site. thus why I did it in the first place.

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    Quote Originally Posted by robin9000 View Post
    No am not charging her. I am doing it for free. The reason for that is because I live in a small community. One way for me to get my foot in the door for computer services is to have a link on a site. thus why I did it in the first place.
    Fair enough. I suspected that might be the case. That does change my criticism a tiny bit.

    But, my basic point is that after viewing the site, I don't really want to eat at that restaurant more. It's not an effective marketing/advertisement site. It looks generic in all the wrong ways.

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    Try this script:
    Code:
    // JavaScript Document
    /* Original Script 2009 John Davenport Scheuer
       as first seen in http://www.dynamicdrive.com/forums/
       username: jscheuer1 - This Notice Must Remain for Legal Use
       
       Modified By username:Master_script_maker of http://www.dynamicdrive.com/forums/
       */
    (function(t) {
      document.write('<div id="js_footer"><\/div>');
      var links = [
      [ // declare href: , text: , title: for each centered link -
        {href: 'privacy.html', text: 'Privacy Policy', title: ''},
        {href: 'terms.html', text: 'Terms of use', title: ''},
        {href: 'disclaimer.html', text: 'Disclaimer', title: ''},
        {href: 'http://validator.w3.org/check/referer', text: 'XHTML', title: 'This page validates as XHTML 1.0 Transitional'},
        {href: 'http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/check/referer', text: 'CSS', title: 'This page validates as CSS'}
      ], 
      [
        {href: 'http://www.robinsden.110mb.com', text: 'Designed by Robin\'s Den', title: 'This site was designed by Robin\'s Den'}
      ]
      ];
      var a = [],
        y = new Date().getFullYear(),
        p = [document.createElement("span")];
      p[0].appendChild(document.createTextNode(t.replace(/_y_/, y)));
      
      for(var i=0;i<links.length;++i) {
        a[i] = [];
        for(var n=0;n<links[i].length;++n) {
          a[i][n]=document.createElement("a");
          a[i][n].href = links[i][n].href;
          a[i][n].appendChild(document.createTextNode(links[i][n].text));
          a[i][n].title = links[i][n].title;
          p[i]=p[i]||p[i-1].cloneNode(0);
          p[i].id = "js_footer_s"+(i+1);
          p[i].appendChild(a[i][n]);
          if(n<links[i].length-1) {
            p[i].appendChild(document.createTextNode("|"));
          }
        }
        document.getElementById("js_footer").appendChild(p[i]);
      }
    
    })("Copyright \xa9 _y_, Marie-Joe Restaurant - ");
    [Jasme Library (Javascript Motion Effects)] My Site
    /\/\@ /\/\@|{
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    Quote Originally Posted by Medyman View Post
    I don't think that it's an issue that you have a similar (if not the same) aesthetic for your personal site. If that's your aesthetic, so be it.

    With that said, I do find the aesthetic to be amateur, pedestrian and somewhat trite. This doesn't do anything to showcase the offerings of Marie-Joe Restaurant. If you're charging this woman for this website, you're doing her a grave disservice.
    What is so terrible about the design?



    Thanks Master Scripter.

    That works, one last thing though is there someway to my my link only a little bigger then the rest of it.
    Last edited by robin9000; 03-05-2009 at 03:53 AM.

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    all you have to do is edit the css:
    Code:
    #js_footer_s2 {
      text-align: right;
      float: right;  
    }
    Maybe:
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    #js_footer_s2 {
      text-align: right;
      float: right;
      font-size: 10pt;
    }
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    Thanks Script Master, by the way the other guy dose not seem to think to highly of my design, I'd like to get your oppinon though, what do you think?

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    Although design is not my specialty, I'd say it is a good layout, but not really appropriate for the nature of the website.
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    Ok, it's an ok site. I'd suggest a few things though:

    Maybe on the home page, there could be a "Welcome to Mari-Joe's Restaurant's Website! [some text about the quality of our food and such]."

    Also, instead of having a link "Specials," you could put a little side bar in that has the specials(of course, no specials for today. )

    Also, your text is over flowing your menu.

    Try different colors too, for example the font colors. Maybe even change the font to arial, verdana, or something else?
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