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    Exclamation Inventions - Any suggestions?

    I, Magicyte, a Junior Coder, coded a pretty cool game for a school project. It took about a month to make, and it was worth it. It is called Inventions and is based on some of Thomas Edison's inventions. Nine of them, in fact. The point of the game is to retrieve the nine in order to win the Nobel Prize. There is a problem, though. Creatures known as "Swipes" are trying to steal them. In fact, they stole the nine inventions from the beginning. Each level gets harder, but you never lose. You use the arrow keys to move around. It is for Internet Explorer 4 and up, all Firefox versions and Opera versions. I left an attachment for people to look at. It has the code and everything. If you could open the .zip file and look at the code, please leave a comment or a suggestion on the code to make it better. If there is an error that you may have found, please let me know immediately. Thanx and please reply on the double!

    -magicyte

    IMPORTANT! INSTALLATION INSTRUCTIONS!
    P.S. To install, click on the Attached File below as a .zip file. It is called Inventions 1.zip. Once a new window opens asking what you want to do with it, either Open or Save it, click Save. It would be best if you could save it to My Documents. It shouldn't take long at all to download. Once that has been downloaded, open up My Documents. Look for the Inventions 1.zip folder. Once you have found it, open it. Once opened, click on File. Look for the option Extract All... Click on it. It will then bring up the Extraction Wizard. Click Next, then click Next again, make sure that the checkbox saying Show Files is checked, and then click Finish. This should open up all of the files. Look for the Internet Explorer file with the name Inventions. Double click on it and then wait. The game should come up. Click on Start in the iFrame and then read the Instructions on how to play. Then you will be able to play. Hope this helps!
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    Default Por Favor - Rapido y Reply

    If anybody would like to play the video game I made, just let me know. I am in need of a reply to make it better for sale. I am a programmer who needs to know if this code is good. Any good comment would be nice. Possibly a suggestion would be better. Plz reply OTD.

    -magicyte

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    Wow, I never thought of forming javascript in to a fun game, I usually just make effects with it, but that's pretty cool.
    One thing would be to add a little beat(music) to the background
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    Default Thank You For Replying!!!

    THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH, NILE, FOR REPLYING!!!

    -magicyte

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    Oh, yeah, DANG!! You gots a lot of posts!!

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    You too many.

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    Yeah, so?!

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    What is your suggestion? Did you try it out yet!? It really is an awesome game!!!

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    I don't understand what you said...

    -magicyte

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    I haven't checked out the game, but your code is incredibly ugly. It could do with a good refactor -- you can make it more modular, more elegant, and probably cut the size of the codebase by about 80%.
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    Well, I programmed the thing a while back. all of those if statements can be replaced with

    yada ? sdf : lkj;

    I didn't know much a while back. It IS ugly, I know, but do you have any idea of how I could make it better, faster, and less ugly?

    -magicyte

    P.S. What did you mean by ugly? Jumbled? Spaghetti code? Complexed statements?

    P.P.S. 日本語が分かります too!

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    I do also admit that it is (S)(u)(C)(k)(I)(s)(H). Afterall, I made it for school, and I didn't even know that it was compatible with my school's server, so I ended up dragging my darn PC down to School.

    -magicyte

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