recruit site (all mine)

**Demonicman** · 03-04-2007, 02:54 PM

so far im doing decent on it and most of my posts here are regards to coding on that site

http://www.kalrith.com

got my dad to buy the domain for me

any suggestions feel free to post em here... (i know i need a new template because the one i have now sucks)

**BLiZZaRD** · 03-04-2007, 03:53 PM

The site looks nice, links work, and for being severely under construction, is pretty easy to navigate.

I like the idea too, pretty fresh (and anything that keeps those guys off other types of forums is a bonus

)

One thing to consider is a CCL I noticed your self made copyright on the pages there. Instead, try this link Read the page then click the "learn how to" link at the very bottom.

I agree about a new layout. Personally when the page loaded I went "WHOA!" there is a HIGH contrast in theme colors, and very dark to very bright isn't always a good choice. If you could bring each of those extreme colors (yes even the black) to a more medium version of it's current self, it will help the page flow. You could perhaps find a more "high tech" background image and lose the Q-bert style twilight zone fan backdrop

Lose the tables and use <div> instead, and structure them better so the content is more at an eye pleasing, flowing means. Meaning I read left to right, top to bottom, When I view your page my eyes bounce all over the page trying to keep up. If everything was a bit more inline it would be better for my eyes, which means I will stay longer, which means I will join, which in turn means I will use the site.

Good Luck with the finished product, its a great start so far

**Twey** · 03-04-2007, 04:04 PM

You should probably get a native English speaker to check your spelling and grammar. It's quite good, but there are still some errors ("havent" needs an apostrophe, "questionaire" has two Ns, "recruit" is a verb not an adjective, &c.).

**mburt** · 03-04-2007, 04:07 PM

The design doesn't thrill me, but I like the way the content is controlled (menu on top, content centered). Good for being under construction, good job!

**Demonicman** · 03-04-2007, 04:17 PM

thanks twey... maybe i could ask the english teacher in the class im getting a 55% in :P

**Demonicman** · 03-04-2007, 04:22 PM

oh and thanks everyone else... i know the template sucks but until i get the whole submit recruit link thing done i will change it but for now the template stays

**Demonicman** · 03-06-2007, 11:28 AM

i edited it to make it look better

how does it look now?

**Twey** · 03-06-2007, 02:54 PM

The design's much nicer, although I don't like the highlight style for the rollover on the left -- you should just leave it as normal links like the rest of them. However, the site doesn't validate.