I made a site (Like Google)

[npsari]

Hello there :)

I am glad that my site is getting popular, but, your honest opinion will help me fix things on the site

It is about earning money by displaying mini banners (Same idea like Google adsense, Adbrite, Bidvertiser, etc... But simpler)

What is your first impression? what do you think?

Thank you in advance

>> http://www.yavrim.com <<

[Snookerman]

About the site? The design is not that nice imo, the wave thingy is cut off in a weird, abrupt way. The number things at the bottom, what are they? Confusing.

The code? Well, no offense but it's really bad. Google for some html tutorials and then validate it.

I know I'm being a bit "rough" but I'm sure you weren't looking for compliments, this should be more helpful.

Good luck!

[JasonDFR]

Errors found while checking this document as HTML 4.01 Transitional!
Result: 287 Errors, 16 warning(s)

Hire a developer.

[npsari]

Thank you for the feedback
Actually, i think i will get rid of the blue at the top
The reason iam keeping it is because i am trying to find another gradient image


By the way, what errors did you find, how do you check for errors?

[JasonDFR]

Go here:

http://validator.w3.org/

Type in an URL

[AlexAcosta]

why is that a site like Google?
what do you mean? Google is a search engine first of all..

[Master_script_maker]

i believe he means like the Google adsense service

[Medyman]

It doesn't show much confidence in your service if you're using Google Ads on your homepage. If your service works, what's the need for that?

[npsari]

It doesn't show much confidence in your service if you're using Google Ads on your homepage. If your service works, what's the need for that?

Yes, that's a problem... I was thinking if should i put Google adsense or not.

I might have to remove them and put something else

But my site is mainly to offer banners to people who cannot display Javascript in their pages

Like in their Myspace profiles, or Hi5 profiles, etc...

[Master_script_maker]

i believe he means similar to the Google adsense service

[Snookerman]

Wait a minute! Could you inform me on one issue? I've looked everywhere in this thread* but I can't seem to understand how the site is similar to Google. Will someone please take the time to answer my question, because I really can't grasp how Google has anything to do with this site. As you can see, after my intense searching**, I was so intrigued by this that I just had to register and post this question.
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*By looking everywhere I mean I read the title and clicked the link, then immediately posted this question.
**See above

[Master_script_maker]

He made a advertising site where you could make money by placing one of their ads on your site. Google Adsense (https://www.google.com/adsense) also allows you to make money by placing one of their ads on your site.

[JVposter]

Hello there :)

I am glad that my site is getting popular, but, your honest opinion will help me fix things on the site

It is about earning money by displaying mini banners (Same idea like Google adsense, Adbrite, Bidvertiser, etc... But simpler)

What is your first impression? what do you think?

Thank you in advance

>> http://www.yavrim.com <<




Hello!

Has allot of commercials and it is difficult to read. The pictures are big and the font is small. You should improve the design. Make it easy to watch.

regards,