Give me some feed back please

[FyshY]

Hey i have just started a new personal page (for fun), plus my school offeres web hosting for free =) ...... i don't have much any content .... not shure what i am going to make it into yet .... So far i just have the title "Nocturnal Emissions" ... I can only play and mess with it in the middle of the night so i thought that was a great idea. Well here it is

http://bob.ivytech.edu/~fysh/

be crule .....

[BLiZZaRD]

Looks pretty good for now, get some content in it and try again.

Your exit page leave little to be desired...

[djr33]

What is the point of that?

Just testing your page, I clicked Exit. How old are you? Immature and offensive...

The scroll buttons were kinda cool, but then I got bored, and it went too slowly. Please leave the scrollbar, so I can control the speed myself.

Did you even notice that you spelled the title incorrectly on your "content" page?

[tech_support]

At least when exiting your page, it should be brought back to the previous page or the home page. (Or not even have it at all)

People can take offense to it and complain. Then you're busted if it's school hosting.

The colour of your home page (not main) is disgusting.

The scrollers will annoy people.

The images appear to have a black line over the eye.

It doesn't validate (http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fbob.ivytech.edu%2F%7Efysh%2F)

It uses frames.

Bad page labeling.


<meta name="GENERATOR" content="Microsoft FrontPage Express 2.0">

You using FrontPage Express 2.0?

[FyshY]

Ya .... i used the version of front page that is loaded on my this computer .... but that is just to change backgrounds and such really fast .... other than that i either type out the source or use other html software ..... Thanks for you thoughts people ... ill change the the exit link .....

[caipirinha]

So far I dont get where you want to go with this. I do get that using that cartoon will take you nowhere.

The black and white design is nice and the vertical girl is beautiful, she looks like Adriana Lima. Be careful not to be too graphic unless you want a **** site.

I think that you wanted to mirror the girl image but they are cropped differently and therefore not mirrored. I would make them the same or very different. Right now it looks like a mistake.

The image on the first page looks too cut out. If you cant extract her better you need to shoot the model with a white background that will blend in with your page.

Bob

[Twey]

I take an Ancient Greek view on nudity, which is that the human body should be viewed as beautiful and tasteful; there is nothing intrinsically unpleasant about it.

I'm pretty sure I commented on an earlier version of this thread. Was it deleted?

[BLiZZaRD]

No Twey, that was a similar topic about someones banner creation. :D

[Twey]

No, no, I'm certain it was that site. The name was the same, although the images have changed -- they were silhouettes before.

[insanemonkey]

www.insanemonkey.tk has some content you can use